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Story of Evil Chaper 20: The Last Moment

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~In King Hall~

Blue Girl: why Rin?
why can't I kill him now?

Rin: ........
that not the Prince..

Blue Girl: !!!!
you mean!

Rin: a scapegoat..
the real Prince is somewhere.. out there in the Town

Blue Girl: then let's find the real Prince!

Rin: where exalty?
Even if we look for him
there still people that still loyal to him..
he can be hide anywhere

Blue Girl: !!!!
then how would we find the real Prince?

Rin: ........
let' ask the scapegoat..

Blue Girl: That a good Idea

~In dungeon~

Aoi mind: back to this place again.. *look down* *her hands and feet been handcuffs*
hm? *hear foot step come closer*

Rin: *look at the Aoi*

Aoi: *look at Rin* ..........
what do you want?

Rin: I know your not the real Prince..
am I right, Aoi?

Aoi: *shock*
how did you know?

Rin: I hear your conversation
you said you will take his place..
am I right?

Blue Girl: what!
Rin.. if you knew they going to switch place
why didn't you stop them?!

Rin: .......
I don't know either, why I don't stop them..
my heart tell me to let the Prince go..

Blue Girl: you took pity of that Prince!
he nothing but a cold heart Prince!!
he is Evil!

Aoi: he is not Evil!!

Blue Girl: *shock for what Aoi said*

Rin: ........
Aoi.. why you protect him so much?

Aoi: ...........

Blue Girl: Tell us dammit! *drew her sword to Aoi neck*

Aoi : ........ *look at the Blue Girl*

Aoi mind: isn't it simple..
I want to protect him..
and his pure smile..

Aoi: I owe him my life

Blue Girl: *shock* ........

Aoi: he save me when I still a kid
I only repay my debt to him..
A life for a life..

Blue Girl: ......
*sheathe her sword* you regret for saving him *turn around and walk away*

Aoi mind: I don't regret it..

Rin: Aoi.. you the only one that still loyal to him..
I hope he know that

Aoi: don't worry..
he know that..
cause he treat me more than a Maid..

Rin: ........
Is your Twins Okay?

Aoi: don't worry..
he safe..

Rin: is he know that you sacrifice yourself to save the Prince?

Aoi: I told him..
and he don't mind

Rin: Aoi.. you know if you die..
he will be alone *sad face*

Aoi: .......
my Step Brother will take care of him
he won't be alone

Rin: ...... *look at Aoi*

Aoi: what wrong?

Rin: aren't you scare Aoi?
if this continue..

Aoi: like I told you before Rin..
I will die in his place
I don't mind *smile*

Rin: *shock* *tears fall*
how can you smile like that!
*hug Aoi*

Aoi: *shock* Rin???

Rin: I don't want you to die Aoi..
you were my bestfriend..
I.. I..

Aoi: I'm sorry Rin
I already made my choice..
I can't go back now..

Rin: ........ *stand up* *wipe her tear*
I will miss you Aoi..

Aoi: I will miss you too Rin *smile*

Rin: *walk away*

Aoi: *close her eyes* *sing*

~Few hour later~

Aoi: *still singing*

Nao: even after years past
you still have a beatiful voice Aoi..

Naoto: I agreed..

Aoi: *shock* Nao! Naoto!
what are you guys doing here?

Naoto: we going to get you out of here.. *try to unlock the handcuff*

Aoi: WHAT! NO DON'T *stop Naoto*

Nao: why?! if we don't save you..
you will die

Aoi: that is my plan..
I want to die in Aoki place!

Naoto: Aoki doesn't want you to die..
he order me to save you..

Aoi: please don't save me..
Let them think I'm the Prince..
If they know the Prince is still alive
they will hunt Aoki the rest of his life

Nao: but..

Aoi: no but!
stay away from me!!

Naoto: ........ *sad face*
Aoi.. please.. let us save you *tears fall*
your my Sister
I don't want to lose you..

Aoi: ...... *touch Naoto cheek*
I understand your feeling Naoto..
and you too Nao..

Nao: ........

Aoi: but I choose this..

Naoto: I won't accept it *hug Aoi* *cry*

Aoi: ......
Naoto.. I have a wish, will you listen to my wish?

Naoto: what is it?

Aoi: I wish for Aoki to have a better life with you guys..
please grant my wish

Nao: Aoi.. *cry*

Naoto: I.. I will grant your wish Aoi..
I will make sure Aoki have a better life

Aoi: Thank you *soft smile*

Naoto: *shock*

Aoi: you guys must go now..
I don't want the guards found you two

Nao: let's go Naoto

Naoto: Okay.. *stand up*

Aoi: I have another request..

Nao: what is it?

Aoi: If Aoki come to my execution..
if he try to save me.. please stop him
I do not want him to reveal his true identity

Naoto: .......
don't worry
if he do that we will stop him..

Aoi: Thanks *smile*

Nao: ...... *walk with Naoto*

Aoi mind: good bye..
....... *look down*
hm? there something Aoki jacket? *search his Jacket*
*take out a small box* what is this?
*open the box and shock*

Aoi: a ring..? *a forget me not flower tied in the ring*
....... *take out the ring*
I wonder if this ring is for Kaiko when Aoki intends to propose her?
hm? *see a small note in the box*

Aoi mind: *take out the note and read it* *read*
Aoi.. we be together.. forever, from Aoki..
*tears fall* ........
Aoki.. *cry*

~The Execution Day~

Rin: Aoi..
is time..

Aoi: ....... *stand up*
I'm ready.. *demon eyes*

Rin: *shock* .....

Aoi: you Okay Rin?

Rin: I'm.. I'm Okay *release the handcuffs from Aoi* *tied Aoi hands*
come with me..

Aoi: Okay..

~In front the Castle~

Townspeople: KILL HIM!!!
KILL THE PRINCE NOW!!!

Aoi: ...... *walk to the cutter head*

~Somewhere in the crowds~

Aoki: step aside!

Naoto: Aoki!! don't do it!

Nao: Aoki!!!

Aoki mind: I must save Aoi *breath heavy*

~In Aoi~

Aoi: huh? *saw someone wearing a cloak walking toward Aoi*
It can't be! *demon eyes disappear*

Aoki: Aoi.. *Aoki and Aoi look at each other*

Aoi: .......

Aoki: Aoi I- *shock*

Aoi mind: *put one finger to her lip*
please Aoki.. don't reveal your true identity

Aoki: Aoi..
huh! *saw a ring in Aoi finger*

Aoki mind: that ring!! *tears fall* *look down*
....... *look at Aoi and smile*

Aoi mind: *shock* Aoki.. *smile*

Rin: ........
put your head in the cutter head now..

Aoi: *put her head in the cutter head*

~In Naoto~

Naoto: where the hell is he?

Nao: Naoto.. over there!!

Naoto: Aoki!! *approach Aoki*

Nao: Aoki.. don't do stupid thing! *notice they in front Aoi*
Aoi..

Aoi mind: *look at Nao, Naoto and Aoki*
Nao.. Naoto.. please take care of Aoki

Rin: today the Prince of White Kingdom will die!!

Townspeople: KILL HIM!!!

*The church bell ring*

Aoi: Oh, it's time for a snack *smile*

Rin mind: I'm sorry Aoi *release the rope* *the cutter fell and Aoi is death*

Nao mind: *hold her scream* Aoi.. *cry*

Naoto mind: is all my fault!! *cry*

Aoki mind: Aoi.. *cry and hold the bottle that Aoi give to him*
*walk away*

Blue Girl mind: hm? *saw Aoki*
I know that face!! is him!! *approach Aoki*

Rin: *saw Kaiko run*
something not right! *approach Kaiko*

Blue Girl: I will avenge Len!!
*draw her sword*

Nao: STOP! *stop the Blue Girl*

Blue Girl: What! *stop running*
what are you doing?! step aside!

Naoto: we won't *protect Nao*

Rin: what going on here?

Blue Girl: I saw him!
I saw the real Prince!

Rin: you saw him!
where!

Blue Girl: there!! *point to Aoki*

Rin: that him!!

Naoto: don't you dare kill him!

Blue Girl: you still loyal to him!
he nothing now!
let us finish him!!

Nao: and after you kill him..
you will feel satisfy?
you already kill an innocent girl just now!

Blue Girl: *shock*

Naoto: If peoples know you kill the wrong person..
they will blame you for murder..

Rin: he right..
we must let him go..

Blue Girl: but!!

Rin: you want to lose your head?

Blue Girl: no.. *look down*

Rin: then.. sheath your sword now

Blue Girl: *scabbard her sword*

Nao: thanks for not kill Aoki..

Rin: you guys must be close with the Prince..

Naoto: we are his Cousin..
We protect him because this is Aoi last request

Rin mind: Aoi last request..

Rin: will you keep her promise?

Nao: of course!

Rin: good then *smile*

Naoto: by the way..
where Aoki? *look around*

Nao: he disappear!!

Rin: don't worry..
we will help you find him..
*look at Kaiko* don't you dare kill him *glare*

Blue Girl: Okay.. Okay..

~In Harbor~

Aoki: *cry* I'm sorry...Aoi *collapse*

????: *saw Aoki collapse*
*approach Aoki* hey.. are you Okay???

~To Be Continue~
wow.. O.O
I can believe I made this story till chapter 20^^
there so many ><

Can you guys guess who the person that found Aoki collapse in the Harbor?
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SitangTsukiJikarin's avatar
O[]olll  !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  This day has come....Aoi was dead... ;_;

Aoi's heart is really beautiful...Aoki was very lucky to have sister like her, 
pity that everything get worse.... 
T^T

Well...guess from the song "Daughter of white", the one who found Aoki must be male rather than female,  cuz in your story, many chars are genderbending...
Let me see...There're yellow kingdom(Take place green, and is in original story), white kingdom(take place yellow, also in the original story), blue kingdom(in the original story)....I think there're another hidden Characters too.

I need to choose only one genderbending...
Luki - Possible but not really, cuz he's already in early chapters..
Meito - Maybe but might not in the story...
Hakuo/dell - Impossible, cuz both of them has white hair, if they're exist they must be in white kingdom...
Gakuko - Is a girl and very impossible(guess from the song "King of purple")
Mikuo - Possible...Cuz I doubt that in the original story...White is unlucky color, green and yellow are the main, but in this story white and yellow are the main color, so I think green must take place of white....

I guess it was Mikuo
Am I right???
:3